the last 4 sections would benefit from some more stills
check the presentation - it zooms in too close on the paragraphs (i'm getting old and struggle with that sort of thing)
check spelling and grammar (caps!)
MOST IMPORTANTLY YOU MUST HAVE A CONCLUSION AT THE END SUMMARIZING THE CONVENTIONS OF THIS GENRE. YOU'VE ANALYSED 3 VIDS (WELL) BUT NOT LINKED THEM TOGETHER AS A WHOLE, WHICH IS WHAT THIS TASK ASKS...
SO WHAT ARE THE COMMON THEMES/COSTUMES/PROPS IN THE INDIE GENRE???
the last 4 sections would benefit from some more stills
ReplyDeletecheck the presentation - it zooms in too close on the paragraphs (i'm getting old and struggle with that sort of thing)
check spelling and grammar (caps!)
MOST IMPORTANTLY YOU MUST HAVE A CONCLUSION AT THE END SUMMARIZING THE CONVENTIONS OF THIS GENRE. YOU'VE ANALYSED 3 VIDS (WELL) BUT NOT LINKED THEM TOGETHER AS A WHOLE, WHICH IS WHAT THIS TASK ASKS...
SO WHAT ARE THE COMMON THEMES/COSTUMES/PROPS IN THE INDIE GENRE???